2013年雅思考试:边看剑桥雅思阅读边学写作

2013-04-08 13:36:19 雅思阅读雅思写作

  Many studies have shown that children harbour(英语的意思是keep nagtive thought in mind,所以呢,如果说错误观点的话我们可以用这个词) misconceptions about ‘pure’, curriculum science.

  例子:Others harbour misconceptions that assessment on teachers’ behaviour will result in lack of respect.

  Despite(用一个让步的词引出作者观点) the extensive coverage(媒体类的话题必定会用到的词汇) in the popular media of the destruction of rainforests, little formal information is available(这个词中文很难解说,英语的话就是able to be used or obtained/somebody is not occupied) about children’s ideas in this area.

  例子Despite the extensive coverage in the popular media of the violence, little case is available to show the tendency of children being violent.

  Such(代词是英语中重要的连接词,这里一个such就已经把上文的内容总结了,所以不需要加任何连词或副词)variation can no doubt be explained with reference to(其实就是关于的意思,还可以用with respect to, in terms of等)the habitats in which individual species have developed.

  例子 Such criminal cases can no doubt be explained with reference to the breakdown of family.

  Navajo is far from alone(就是说本非个案).

  例子 The argument against tobacco giant is far from alone

  Isolation breeds(孕育的意思,这里可以直接等于lead to) linguistic diversity.

  例子 the breakdown of family breeds the seed of potential crime.

  Language is also(also等于in addition,但却是最常用的过度词) intimately bound up with(就是关系密切的意思,就等于connect) culture.

  例子 Pollution is also intimately bound up with economic

  Disenchantment(失去魔力的意思,这里是指传统医疗每况愈下的意思,其实这句用在小作文中极其合适) with orthodox medicine has seen(见证,也可以用witness,或者last 20 years witnesses)the popularity of alternative therapies in Australia climb steadily during the past 20 years.

  例子 Disenchantment with beef consumption has seen the popularity of consuming pork in Australia climb steadily during the past 20 years.

  Rather than(不是而是,也是个不错的过渡句) resisting or criticising this(代词的魔力我就不强调)trend, increasing number of(其实就是more and more,你可以发掘外国几乎是不用more and more的)Australian doctors, particularly younger ones, are forming group practices.

  例子 Rather than resisting this trend, increasing number of teachers are concluding the assessment from students for the self-improvement purpose.

  Typically, children do not end up on the streets due to a single cause, but to a combination of factors: a dearth of adequately funded schools, the demand for income at home, family breakdown and violence.( 经典的中心论点句,我就不多说了)

  例子 Children do not end up in the prison due to a single cause, but to a combination of factors: unfortunate breakdown of family, absent attention from parents, severe addiction to violent media.

  Nutrition is another area(和also一样,是外国很喜欢用的连接词) that sports trainers have failed to address adequately.

  例子Severe healthy damage is another area that tobacco enterprises have failed to mention adequately

  Revolutionary ideas still(还是起到also的作用) come from the athletes themselves.(这句是直接把要写的点给提出来,没有任何拖拉,这种direct的方式,中国学生很多时候很难做到)

  例子 Astronomical tax revenue still comes from the tobacco giant.

  以后有空还会继续更剑桥5,6,7,8系列,当然内容可能不止于分论点句,还会涉及到写作的其他部分

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