IELTS Essay:
Causes of Failures
失败原因
by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
谢振礼老师海外投稿
》Discuss what you believe to be the most common factors that cause people to fail in their lives? Include some suggestions about how failures can best be avoided.
写成功的原因刚好是失败的原因相反。两题可以相提并论。抽象的问题想来最好是抽象的回答。知道有名师主张把抽象的问题具体化，好像真的拥有服人的例证在握。谢振礼老师认为，现场写作考试，时间紧迫无瑕冒出适合的例证，不如还是采用抽象的理由与观念来代替。反正抽象来抽象去，装模作样，自圆其说，应付应付罢了.
>Essay Sample 314字
Introduction--3 sentences 60字
1. It has often said that to avoid failures in life it requires a strong will to construct the road to success. 【21字】
2. People with a desire strong enough can stand better chances passing frustrations on their way to success. 【17字】
3. Many factors that cause them to fail can tentatively be generalized as the lack of will to plan carefully and work patiently. 【22字】
Body A --6 sentences 78字
1. To begin with, planning carefully comes nearer daring than timidity. 【10字】
2. It may be because that the courage to move is essential to overcome the fear to fail again and again. 【20字】
3. When defeat comes, it must be taken as a signal that plans are not sound. 【15字】
4. As a consequence, the moment avoiding failure and refusing to rebuild new plans traps people on the path to success. 【20字】
5. In other words, failure is not fatal but the failure to change is. 【13字】
6. That clearly indicates that people win only if they are not afraid to lose, knowing very well that they may stumble because they are moving. 【25字】
Body B--6 sentences 100字
1. Likewise, failure to work persistently may amount to failure itself. 【10字】
2. The reason is that people with patience can accept the fact that failure does not always count. 【17字】
3. More than any other factor, what causes people to fail is that after one failure they would stop trying again with new strategies. 【23字】
4. Indeed, most of the failures in life come from people who have the habit of making excuses. 【17字】
5. In contrast, people succeed when they realize that patience can outlive failure and that there is no failure except in no longer trying. 【23字】
6. Without any doubt, failure has its cost, but it must be considered as the tuition to be paid for success. 【20字】
Conclusion--3 sentences 76字
1. Ironically, failures can best be avoided by saying nothing, doing nothing, and being nothing as a result of the want of a strong desire for success. 【26字】
2. This being the case, it can be said that there are no failures, but just failures to cash in experience and find an alternative course to succeed, or at least to fail more intelligently and try again. 【37字】
3. After all, if people fail, it may mean that the road to success is still under construction。【17字】
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