官方指南教你写好雅思小作文

  为了帮助考生们更好地备考雅思,出国留学网雅思栏目为大家带来“官方指南教你写好雅思小作文”,希望对大家有所帮助哦!

  雅思小作文首段的任务就是改写题目,看似简单,但不是所有烤鸭们都有清晰的思路。“天下武功,唯快不破。” 考场上一定要能够迅速改写小作文题目,速度提升的关键就思路清晰,总结自雅思OG的paraphrasing的8招完美转述。

  # 招数1 “这个表格”替换 (主语)

  具体化:什么表格?(反之亦然,题目说具体表格类型,改写时可换成简称)

  The graph below -- The bar chart / The line chart / The pie chart

  The graph and table – the data / the information (对于信息形式多样的表格可以直接概括为data数据或information信息)

  Gives information 适合的情况下还可以替换为illustrate the performance of

  …gives information about Southland’s main exports -- …illustrates the performance of Southland’s primary exports

  也可以把表格数量具体化: the pie charts – the two pie charts,另外,the 也可以换为this

  # 招数2 “展示了”替换 (动词)

  shows – illustrates / demonstrates 或compares 或gives information/ provides infromation

  除了常见的shows, illustrates, demonstrates这些同义表达的相互替换外,范文中经常会使用compares 或gives information 来表达。

  # 招数3 关键词替换

  1. yearly/ annual…–…over the year / per year年均

  Example: yearly rainfall – amount of rainfall over the year

  the average number of hours of sunshine per year-- annual hours of sunshine

  2. percentage – proportion 比例

  3. male and female -- men and women 男性和女性

  4. 职业类型 – who从句

  Example: academic staff members across the faculties -- who taught in seven different faculties (academic staff:教职人员, 就是”who taught …”的意思)

  5. typical – average “典型的”和“平均的”往往可以互换,比如“平均降雨量”

  6. household – home 家庭的

  Example: in a typical Australian household–in an average Australian home

  7. be consumed– be used 被消耗的/使用的

  8. the proportion of – where …is used

  Example: the proportion of energy consumed -- where energy is used

  9. by age range – of different ages 按不同年龄

  10. give money to charity – donate(v.) / make donation (n.) 捐款

  11. the changes that have taken place at … --…development …的发展

  12. main exports -- primary exports 主要的

  # 招数4 “项目“替换

  具体化:类别A,类别B and 类别C – 3个类别(反之亦然,题目说类别个数,改写时可换成具体类别名称)

  in Moscow and San Francisco -- in two cities

  in three major cities -- in London, New York and Sydney

  # 招数5“动作“具体化

  how a solar powered water pump works-- how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village. (把work这个动词在该写时根据图表具体化为”被用来供水“)

  # 招数6“数据“具体化

  in 2003 and 2013 – in the years 2003 and 2013 (具体化“年“)

  the online shopping sales -- the percentages of online sales (具体化数据类型:百分比)

  # 招数7时间表达

  1. 时间段表达

  from 2003 to 2012– during the period 2003-2012

  2. 将来时间

  当题目中出现对于将来数据的预测时,可以用projection, prediction 来表达,另外,注意细节段落时态要转换为将来时。

  in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025

  # 招数8 词性转换+ 句型转换

  the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre -- how crime rates altered in Newport inner city

  以上例子中,changes是名词,可以说the changes that took place in…/ the changes of ...(使用的句式是定语从句或of 结构“…的“)

  改写之后的alter也表“变化“是动词形式,句型也有the change that…/ of… 变成了how…V+ed (宾语从句)

  把以上招数按照顺序融会贯通,小作文题目改写大法就练成了,让我们来看一看红蓝OG中的具体题目以及改写。

  The graph below shows the percentage of male and femaleacademic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 (practice test 2, blue version)


  Sample Answer:

  The bar chart shows the proportion of men and womenwho taught in seven different faculties of a particular university in 2012.

  The pie chart below showswhere energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. (practice test 4, blue version)

  雅思作文栏目推荐阅读:

  雅思大作文写法步骤

  雅思小作文中分布解析饼形图的写作技巧

  雅思写作中陌生词汇的表达方法

  剑桥雅思11Test1Task1小作文范文及解析

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  为了帮助考生们更好地备考雅思,出国留学网雅思栏目为大家带来“官方指南教你写好雅思小作文”,希望对大家有所帮助哦!

  雅思小作文首段的任务就是改写题目,看似简单,但不是所有烤鸭们都有清晰的思路。“天下武功,唯快不破。” 考场上一定要能够迅速改写小作文题目,速度提升的关键就思路清晰,总结自雅思OG的paraphrasing的8招完美转述。

  # 招数1 “这个表格”替换 (主语)

  具体化:什么表格?(反之亦然,题目说具体表格类型,改写时可换成简称)

  The graph below -- The bar chart / The line chart / The pie chart

  The graph and table – the data / the information (对于信息形式多样的表格可以直接概括为data数据或information信息)

  Gives information 适合的情况下还可以替换为illustrate the performance of

  …gives information about Southland’s main exports -- …illustrates the performance of Southland’s primary exports

  也可以把表格数量具体化: the pie charts – the two pie charts,另外,the 也可以换为this

  # 招数2 “展示了”替换 (动词)

  shows – illustrates / demonstrates 或compares 或gives information/ provides infromation

  除了常见的shows, illustrates, demonstrates这些同义表达的相互替换外,范文中经常会使用compares 或gives information 来表达。

  # 招数3 关键词替换

  1. yearly/ annual…–…over the year / per year年均

  Example: yearly rainfall – amount of rainfall over the year

  the average number of hours of sunshine per year-- annual hours of sunshine

  2. percentage – proportion 比例

  3. male and female -- men and women 男性和女性

  4. 职业类型 – who从句

  Example: academic staff members across the faculties -- who taught in seven different faculties (academic staff:教职人员, 就是”who taught …”的意思)

  5. typical – average “典型的”和“平均的”往往可以互换,比如“平均降雨量”

  6. household – home 家庭的

  Example: in a typical Australian household–in an average Australian home

  7. be consumed– be used 被消耗的/使用的

  8. the proportion of – where …is used

  Example: the proportion of energy consumed -- where energy is used

  9. by age range – of different ages 按不同年龄

  10. give money to charity – donate(v.) / make donation (n.) 捐款

  11. the changes that have taken place at … --…development …的发展

  12. main exports -- primary exports 主要的

  # 招数4 “项目“替换

  具体化:类别A,类别B and 类别C – 3个类别(反之亦然,题目说类别个数,改写时可换成具体类别名称)

  in Moscow and San Francisco -- in two cities

  in three major cities -- in London, New York and Sydney

  # 招数5“动作“具体化

  how a solar powered water pump works-- how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village. (把work这个动词在该写时根据图表具体化为”被用来供水“)

  # 招数6“数据“具体化

  in 2003 and 2013 – in the years 2003 and 2013 (具体化“年“)

  the online shopping sales -- the percentages of online sales (具体化数据类型:百分比)

  # 招数7时间表达

  1. 时间段表达

  from 2003 to 2012– during the period 2003-2012

  2. 将来时间

  当题目中出现对于将来数据的预测时,可以用projection, prediction 来表达,另外,注意细节段落时态要转换为将来时。

  in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025

  # 招数8 词性转换+ 句型转换

  the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre -- how crime rates altered in Newport inner city

  以上例子中,changes是名词,可以说the changes that took place in…/ the changes of ...(使用的句式是定语从句或of 结构“…的“)

  改写之后的alter也表“变化“是动词形式,句型也有the change that…/ of… 变成了how…V+ed (宾语从句)

  把以上招数按照顺序融会贯通,小作文题目改写大法就练成了,让我们来看一看红蓝OG中的具体题目以及改写。

  The graph below shows the percentage of male and femaleacademic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 (practice test 2, blue version)


  Sample Answer:

  The bar chart shows the proportion of men and womenwho taught in seven different faculties of a particular university in 2012.

  The pie chart below showswhere energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. (practice test 4, blue version)

  雅思作文栏目推荐阅读:

  雅思大作文写法步骤

  雅思小作文中分布解析饼形图的写作技巧

  雅思写作中陌生词汇的表达方法

  剑桥雅思11Test1Task1小作文范文及解析

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