2012雅思写作之模拟写作一范例
Task1:
Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
Topic:Comparethetypesofcommunicationusedin1962andin1982.
Youshouldwriteaminimumof150words.
P-phoneC-computerL-letter
写作段落大意:
Short/SimpleIntroduction.
ParagraphtalkingaboutonebehaviourPattern.
ParagraphtalkingaboutcontradictorybehaviourPattern.
ConcludingRemark.
ModelAnswers:
1、GeneralOverview/Introduction.
Thetwopiechartscomparedifferentmethodsofcommunicationusedin1962and1982.Wecanseethatforthethreemediumssurveyed,therearesignificantchangesforeach.
2、Paragraphdealingwithinformationwhichdecreases.
In1962,letterwritingwasthemostpopularformofcommunication,accountingfor50%ofthetotal.However,by1982,thisfigurefelltojust10%,thesmallestofthatyearsfigures.Inthisparagraph,wemakeitclear,whichtimeperiodwearewritingabout.Don'trepeat"theyear"againandagain.
3、Paragraphdealingwithinformationwhichincreases.
Bycontrast,wecanseethattheuseofthephoneandcomputersduringthissameperiodhavebothrisendramatically.Thetelephone,at60%becomesthemostusedformofcommunication,risingfrom35%.Similarily,theuseofcomputers,doublesto30%.(Noneedtouse15%.WecanunderstandOKusingthistypeofphrase.)Overall,wecanseesomeimportantchangesintheformsofcommunicationemployedduringthetwodecadessurveyed.
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