在写作方面，和以往的《剑》系列相比，关于TASK2《剑七》给了增加到了2篇7分以上的议论文，共我们赏析，这样给我们要求高分的烤鸭们明确了写作方向。
我们共同鸟瞰《剑七》写作部分的 outline ：
A类写作 位置 类型TEST1 TASK 1 P30 表格table TEST2 TASK 1 P53 曲线图line chart TEST3 TASK 1 P78 柱形图 bar chart TEST4 TASK1 P101 饼状图 pie chart TEST1 TASK2 P31 教育类话题TEST2 TASK2 P54 犯罪类话题TEST3 TASK2 P79 雅思真题 社会类话题/工作类
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鸟瞰剑七写作
之图表作文 ：
在《剑七》提供的4套图表中，图表的数据和图形有所增加。考官范文的字数由《剑六》的167个字增加到《剑七》的198个字，同时段落也在增加，三段变五段。考官在评语中更侧重于观察数据和图形的主要趋势，最明显的差异，以及在此基础上的适当扩展；是否连接词能准确地被使用；避免不必要的重复内容和抄袭题目的现象；词汇的选择丰富；句子结构多变，准确；语法错误和拼写错误也是不可被忽视的。
Topic : The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
Answer :
The chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989 .
According to the chart , during the period from 1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses in three cities decreased significantly by five percent in New York ( USA ) and about 7.5 percent in both Tokyo (Japan ) and London ( UK ) . While the average house prices increased slightly in two cities Madrid ( Spain ) and Frankfurt ( Germany ) by about 1.5 percent and 2 percent respectively .
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As far as the next period ( 1996 – 2002 ) is concerned , it is clear that the average house prices decreased only in Tokyo ( Japan ) by 5 percent . In contrast the average house prices increased in the rest of cities . In New York it increased consideraply by 5 percent , in Madrid it increased slightly by 4 percent , in Frankfurt it increased by 2 percent .
London has the largest increase in the average house price over the 6 year period from 1996 to 2002 as it increased dramtically by 11 percent .
All in all , there are a wide differences in house prices between the five cities which illustrated in this chart . These differences may be a result of the number of population or the number of houses required in a certain city .
分析：这篇文章用的是齐头式写作模式，考官给了Band 6.5 ；
1. 文章出现了一些拼写错误，省略，少量的语法错误 ，但是文章这些语法错误没有影响文章的整体流畅和考官的阅读 (把它认为是可以理解的语法错误)；
2. 词汇使用并不是很丰富，出现了多次的重复同一词汇的现象 ，但是使用了高水准的词汇表达 ；但是文章句子结构多变复杂，句子结构连贯，段落清晰，能够准确的描述出图表的趋势和特征，给出了非常准确的数据。
3. 文章字数227 符合6分以上的图表作文要求 ；
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