雅思写作预测:那点事(7)

2012-06-02 17:04:05 新东方雅思雅思
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《那点事(7)》。

建议考试时按自然顺序先写Task 1,时间不超过建议的20mins,最好不要挤占Task 2,而打乱顺序先写Task 2,反而容易写错地方。

具体时间可以这样分配:

审题+构思 3 mins

写作 16 mins

检查 1 min(可结合Task 2在考试最后进行)

一、审题:准备题目中文字部分第二段有关图表内容关键词的同义替换,注意图表的文字部分,比如图名和图例,也会提供可替换的词语;还需关注图表中读取数字的单位和数位。

二、构思:图表的特征可以用符号简写在试题册上,考试时试题册就是草稿纸,虽然考试结束后要一并上交,but nobody will read it.

三、写作:关键是遵循写作规范。

1 不写标题:写标题不是画龙点睛,而是狗尾续貂。

2 分段:缩进和齐头两种方式皆可,但比较下面林肯的葛迪斯堡演讲,Gettysburg Address,齐头式更清晰,推荐。

缩进式(Indented form),段首缩进2-4个字母的距离:

Four score and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation: conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war… testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated… can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war.

We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.



我们的努力没有您的支持我们无法做的更好!感谢您拜读《那点事(7)》一文.本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《那点事(7)》。 But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate… we cannot consecrate… we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here.

It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us… that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion… that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain… that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom… and that government of the people… by the people… for the people… shall not perish from the earth.

齐头式(Full block form),段首顶格,段间空行:

Four score and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation: conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war... testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated... can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war.

We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.

But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate... we cannot consecrate... we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here.

It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us... that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion... that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain... that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom... and that government of the people... by the people... for the people... shall not perish from the earth.

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2 单词:写大点儿,大点儿,再大点儿,每行10-12词,字儿太小对考官有种视觉压迫感。

如果记不准拼写,不要用混淆单词内部结构的方式试图蒙混过关,应当换词,比如tomorrow换成the next day.

3 标点:标点是作文的重要部分,要写清楚,禁止连续逗号。

宁柏宇早晨起床,他睁开双眼,他闭上双眼。

(汉语情感分句,感情到了就分,没错)

Ningboyu got up in the morning, he opened his eyes, he closed his eyes.

(英文逻辑分句,逗号不能连接两个完整的句子,错误。因为Ningboyu got up in the morning. He opened his eyes. He closed his eyes. 三句都是完整句子,即可以单独成句,仅用逗号不能连接,如果非要连,中间要加连词。Ningboyu got up in the morning, he opened his eyes, and he closed his eyes.)

4 修改,对雅思橡皮不要有太高预期,如果加长句子,可以采用加入符号配合注释的方式,比如

Ningboyu got up in the morning, ∧and he closed his eyes.

然后在文章写完之后,空一行,写上 ① he opened his eyes, 不过此法不能贪多,不能用到⑥⑦⑧...

四、检查:找最明显的拼写和语法错误,不要留给考官,另外可以用一些有level的词或句型替换初稿中的某些词句。

(本文作者为新东方雅思名师 宁柏宇)



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