以“电影”这一话题为例,如果想有好的表现,那么流畅的表达就至关重要。要做到流畅,你需要有足够多的词汇和观点,而且还要努力避免卡壳,比如你在脑海中寻找合适词汇时所出现的停顿。
下面就来看看考官会如何作答吧!
题目:拯救大兵瑞恩 Saving Private Ryan
Well, actually1,the kind of films I like best are probably2 the older ones. For example3, oneof my favourites is Saving Private Ryan. I think I like war movies and I particularlylike that one, I suppose4 because5 the acting is excellent with Tom Hanks6 anda bunch of other people who are really really good. It’s a good story but Isuppose the thing that is most impressive for me is that initial opening scenewhere the troops are actually landing in Normandyon the beaches. It’s very meaningful for me because my dad was in the SecondWorld War and also because I visited those beaches in Normandy7. It’s easy forme, having been there8, to imagine what those guys were actually facing as theycame off the landing craft and had to face a hail of bullets from the Germanmachine gun posts. And I think the other reason I really like that film isbecause it represents Americawhen America was great, whenAmericawas at its best. Around the time of the Second World War, I think America was abeacon (灯塔) for many countries.It seemed to be freer, and more powerful, more hopeful, more optimistic as wellas gutsy9 (勇敢的). Itseemed to offer more pleasure for human beings as a nation and to be less clutteredup by old traditions that weren’t very useful any more. So I think that’s oneof the reasons I really like that film10 because it represents the best of theUS whereas now I guess the US is a bit more in decline。
学习要点:
1. 控制好说话的节奏,给自己留出思考的时间;
2. 使用副词可以增加表达的准确度,所以不要吝啬使用;
3. for example 就像一个符号,标志着你的表述即将进入具体直观的部分;
4. 用I suppose 代替了I think。平心而论,后者我们已经用得太多了;
5. “因为……所以……”是表现思想逻辑的最基本形式;
6. 如果能够熟练说出几个外国名人的名字,就能给考官留下一个更好的印象,也使得你的回答更具有个人特色和可信度;
7. 将话题与个人经历联系起来,增加了真实性和故事性;
8. 分词短语作插入语,使得语言的节奏感和灵活性跃然纸上,希望你能重点模仿!
9. 通过这种排比式的强调,既可以使语言更有说服力,又可以展现丰富的词汇;
10. 回答要有头有尾!不必进行过多描述,但保证完整性是有效交流的必要原则。