2012年作文真题还原:邀朋友去旅行
2012-10-27 17:01:50 旅行
Write a letter to invite a friend to travel abroad with you In the letter
tell him/her why you intend to travel .
what's your plan for the travel
explain why you invite him/her.
考题出现时间2007-8-25北凉、哈尔滨、郑州、天津、长春、上海、杭州、南{京、昆明、深埘、福州、常宁 长沙
题源分析:
从题干来看,我们在写作时应包括三点信息:说明旅行原因,介绍旅行安排并解释邀请这位朋友的原因。虽然题干没有明确说明,但是作为邀请信,千万不能忘了开篇得先发出邀请。另外,这里有两处都要求写原因。英美人是比较注重逻辑思维的,所以在叙述原因的时候一定要合情合理,有说服力;如果理由太牵强,连自己都不能说服,就更不能说服评卷老师了。所以,这封信件的关键是要求考生发挥自己的聪明才智,极力拓宽思维,给出有说服力的理由。
推荐格式是:
第一段:发出邀请,阐明写信原因:自己要去巴黎旅行,问朋友是否愿意同
行。
第二段:游玩。
第三段:购物。
说明旅行原因:刚忙完一个大项目,申请了年假,有足够的时间可以出国
介绍旅行安排(应该结合巴黎的特点来谈):拜访客户,游览巴黎名胜,
第四段:解释邀请这位朋友的原因:朋友心情不好,可以出国散散心;朋友擅长法语,可给旅行带来很大便利。
第五段:客套话,请朋友考虑然后告知决定。
其他参考观点:
去旅行的原因:
1.工作不愉快,辞职了,想出国散心。
2.最近拿了一笔数目不菲的奖金。
3.在国外的亲戚要结婚了,去参加婚礼,顺便旅游。
邀请这个朋友的原因:
1.跟这个朋友关系最好,想跟他/她一起度过这段美好时光。
2.朋友正在休假,而且假期后就要在那个国家工作了,所以他/她可以先去熟悉一下那里的环境。
3.这个朋友也是同事,前段时间也拿到了不少奖金,正好一起去。
4.朋友正好有空,而且朋友以前就一直想去。
经典范文:
Deaf Anna,
How are you? I haven't seen you for a long time. I hope everything is
Anyway, I'm writing because I intend to travel to France and I am wondering
if you would like to go with me.
I know you will ask why I, such a busy person, would want to travel now. Well, 1
been busy with a big project for almost a whole year, I really want to take a break .So
I applied for annual leave and got two weeks' vacation. And I decide to travel a:
France, where I've been looking forward to go to for many years.
. According to my plan, I will stay in Paris for a whole week: one day for visiting a
customer, five days for sightseeing, and the last day for shopping.
I want you to accompany me because I know you are in a bad mood recently Traveling abroad may help you ease your mind. In addition, my French is not as good as yors,so
you can help me a lot while we are in France. And I will cover all your expenses. ., Please think about my suggestion and whatever your decision is please let me know
Yours faithfully
Cherry
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